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March 23, 2013
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D7000
Shutter Speed
1/160 second
Aperture
F/2.5
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Nov 30, 2012, 2:45:38 PM
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Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.3 (Windows)
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Turning japanese by DmitryElizarov Turning japanese by DmitryElizarov
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In general, I would give this an A. The blurred portion to the right, however, whether intended or not, does seem to distract and take away from the overall composition. The eye continues to be drawn to the right (and to it) rather than on the subject as a whole or details of the model. If it were a full length shot, or even pulled back a little to give the impression of a curtain, etc, that would have worked better.

Otherwise, the model is gorgeous, the lighting superb, And the loose strands of hair highlight the imperfection of a transition, leading back to "turning" in the images title. (and any worked named after a Vapors song can't be all that bad)
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I like this, the eye light looks natural and draws attention to her lovely hazel/green eyes. The pink-green-white colour motif is consistent and very beautiful. The use of foreground-middleground and background add depth to your frame and really bring the space alive. I like the use of the telephoto lens, the shallow depth of field really helps.

I feel that the eyes are a touch too high in the frame and a slight crop that would bring the eyes to the top third rather than top quarter might make this a better frame (only slightly). A bit of texture in the background might make the frame more interesting.
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Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Lovely pink hair and cute, smirking face!  Stunning eyes.  Cool use of color and the obstructed view on the side gives you the sense of being there.
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DmitryElizarov Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thanks ) And for your other comments also. I can't reply everywhere but I certanly read all of them )
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jquest68 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Wow, this is such a beautiful shot. I love the colors and the clarity
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DmitryElizarov Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Professional Photographer
Yes, I'm happy with these colors too )
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TTM77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
<3
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Mintzen Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OOo so beautiful lady! :)
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ameel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
it's a pink hair :#1:
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